I want a extremely strong down to earth essay for my college admission essay. I want my essay to be about how since i was in 8th grade i have struggled horribly with anorexia. My life was so hard and ended up missing over 150 days of high school feeling too weak and to insecure to get up and attend school causing my grades and academic ability to struggle severely. i spent my freshman, sophomore, and junior year dedicating my life to out patient programs for eating disorder treatment and several therapist driving hours away into NYC to see the best doctors. Thankfully i have made a huge recovery. But i really want this essay to show colleges that i do not want my disease to define my future. My grades to not define me and it was so hard balancing fighting for my life when being hospitalized over 5 times and keeping my grades some what ok. I want the chance to get a fresh start and for a college to give me the chance to start my future. feel free to put in your own ideas and make it strong. I don’t want it to just be straight forward listing my struggles. I want a strong thesis and want the essay to really make people feel something. i have tried a lot of websites but none of the essays are making me feel something they are all just very straight forward.
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